Page 6 - Registration
The ‘Device Registration’ doesn’t actually seem to do anything - just takes you to the page with the info about the device you select.
If that’s the intended operation, it could be better explained.
Page 7 - Kit contents
Mine was missing the M2 screws!
Page 8 - Overview
This is good - like it 
(the power selection jumper is not identified)
Page 9 - Windows Drivers
I didn’t do this - Windows found all the drivers itself
Pages 9-12
Similar to what’s in the User Guide, but missing a few steps; eg,
- power supply selection
- connecting the antenna
- the on/off switch
Pages 13-14 Local connection
All fine
Page 15 - Octave free trial
doesn’t reflect the current experience
Pages 15-18 - Send to Octave
I couldn’t get this to work:
Pages 18-20 Control from Octave
worked fine.
It references the Octave developer site, but that is purely Red-focussed, and doesn’t quite reflect the actual online experience.